This week my class has been writing about past tense. my story is about a shark that is trying to make friends. I liked imagining what it would be like to live like a shark. next time I would use more descriptive language.
- The main person me gary
- Bruce the whale
- gary trying to make friends
- No one liked gary
- Gary was friendly
- Gary didn't want to hurt anyone
- Gary just wanted some friends
- Gary made friends with Bruce and dory
One day I swam around the ocean, and everyone moved out of my way! Why? Because they were all scared of me.But what they did not know is i'm a friendly shark.When people were in the water i popped up wanting to play they all swam away.
I always dreamed of flying i went to sleep i flew through the wind as it was suffocating my face.I made friends with a whale his name was bruce i got along with his friends to he was huge.
Even when I went to get some food which was seaweed everyone swam away.When I was swimming to my house I saw this other shark named dory she didn’t swim away we went to play a game.
