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Tuesday, 20 September 2016

odins narritive 20/9


It was a windy spooky night when the moon monster was spying on the little girl. the little girl was trying to get the bucket out of the well. Then she sensed something mysterious in the woods. the moon monster came down and scared the little girl when the moon monster was as scared as the little girl.But the little girl was still being heroic. the moon monster was congenial.

5 comments:

  1. i like how you discrieb how it felt that night
    focus more

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  3. I like the described words.
    I don't like that you didn't use paragraphs.

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  4. there wasn't enough words to make a paragraph

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