Gary The Shark

This week my class has been writing about past tense. my story is about a shark that is trying to make friends. I liked imagining what it would be like to live like a shark. next time I would use more descriptive language.

• The main person me gary
• Bruce the whale
• gary trying to make friends
• No one liked gary
• Gary was friendly
• Gary didn't want to hurt anyone
• Gary just wanted some friends
• Gary made friends with Bruce and dory

 

One day I swam around the ocean, and everyone moved out of my way! Why? Because they were all scared of me.But what they did not know is i'm a friendly shark.When people were in the water i popped up wanting to play they all swam away.

I always dreamed of flying i went to sleep i flew through the wind as  it was suffocating my face.I made friends with a whale his name was bruce i got along with his friends to he was huge.   

Even when I went to get some food which was seaweed everyone swam away.When I was swimming to my house I saw this other shark named dory she didn’t swim away we went to play a game.

   

Simon,Tyrell,Odin,Moni's dance

This is our dance that we done it was a bit hard because people kept mucking up but we got there in the end.

Child labor

What i enjoyed:i enjoyed searching up new facts and also learning the facts 

What I found hard:trying to put texts when they keep disappearing on me. 

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social justice

WALT  identify people in our community who may be isolated

My Mihi

Tena koutou katoa

Ko Odin Toku ingoa

Ko mama Mel ahau

Ko papa Mark ahau

Ko  St Bernadette's Toku kura

Ko Otautahi ahau

Ko Waimakariri ahau

Ko Aoraki ahau

No reira

Tena koutou, Tena koutou, Tena koutou katoa  

Is graffiti art or is it messy?

WALT... Use the OREO model to write an argument

What I enjoyed: I enjoyed working by myself. And being able to write about a topic I like

What I would do different: i would write more and write more about how graffiti cost the council money.

My opinion:

I think that tagging is messy because the council  has to clean it up but it is cool to see the ones in town.The ones in town people get paid for and they do it professionally and get permission from the council.The other people just do it for fun.

Reason:

I think it is messy and people shouldn't do it. I know people won’t listen or respect the council's decisions so i think they should band spray cans and tagging pens so they can stop tagging and destroying the council's property that's what i think the council should do.

explain/evidence

I think graffiti costs the city a lot of money because of people even kid are the most difficult the kids tag the most. The people/kids are destroying the council’s property and we can't really do that much about it. The ones in the town are cool but the ones on the side of the motor way are disgusting.

Opinion:

I think they should band spray can and tagging pens so they won't be able to tag any more. They should only let the builder that have uniform have the spray cans and that have Id card should be able to have the spray cans and paint. Do you think it's art or graffiti?   

           

fair testing