WALT... Use the OREO model to write an argument
What I enjoyed: I enjoyed working by myself. And being able to write about a topic I like
What I would do different: i would write more and write more about how graffiti cost the council money.
My opinion:
I think that tagging is messy because the council has to clean it up but it is cool to see the ones in town.The ones in town people get paid for and they do it professionally and get permission from the council.The other people just do it for fun.
Reason:
I think it is messy and people shouldn't do it. I know people won’t listen or respect the council's decisions so i think they should band spray cans and tagging pens so they can stop tagging and destroying the council's property that's what i think the council should do.
explain/evidence
I think graffiti costs the city a lot of money because of people even kid are the most difficult the kids tag the most. The people/kids are destroying the council’s property and we can't really do that much about it. The ones in the town are cool but the ones on the side of the motor way are disgusting.
Opinion:
I think they should band spray can and tagging pens so they won't be able to tag any more. They should only let the builder that have uniform have the spray cans and that have Id card should be able to have the spray cans and paint. Do you think it's art or graffiti?
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